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Working through the pain by SpectreCx9 Working through the pain by SpectreCx9
Here we see Mu crawling out of a crash, horribly injured and still going. His willpower forces him to tank on, and his life support systems are helping him. However, his pain eventually takes a toll on his body as we see here. He tries to push on, even though he got impaled by a jagged metal rod.
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RainingBombs Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
Looks really nice, altough it would be better if, idk, you add more debris in other parts, or the jet its meant to not explode after crash?
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SpectreCx9 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
That's what they're all saying, haha! But thanks. I'll keep that in mind for future reference.
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TheFusionLatios Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2017
Eddddgggggggggggggge.
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SpectreCx9 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Of course this is coming from you, Ordo.
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TheFusionLatios Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2017
Yeppers
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CatzK3 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
Okay first & foremost let me get started by saying that so far I haven't really seen anything that makes Mu special or distinctive, I haven't seen any trademarks or features that make him stand out. he is just some guy, I think I have seen maybe 1 or 2 other pictures of him, & in those he was wearing a different outfit & I do believe he conceals his face quite a lot? correct me If I am wrong?

What I am saying is, there is nothing here that helps define this character for what he is... sorry but its true, I'd suggest giving him a unique feature like a very distinct hairstyle, or facial features.

This drawing although incredibly simplistic (Nothing wrong with that) isn't done badly, it is alright actually, the footsteps that gets smaller into the distance, the characters angle, It all ads up, although I would have maybe paid more attention & put more detail into the crash to reveal to the viewer what exactly it is that crashed. a jet? a gunship? a drone? We don't really see that, & If you don't reveal it you are taking away words from the story this picture is supposed to tell, & that is especially important when you are gunna make a minimalistic compisition such as this work. next time, don't be afraid to pay more attention to finer details.

the angle Mu is in doesn't really tell us much about his state, you can't really make out any details on his suit, you can't see what he is wearing other than It's a "Space type suit"

the look on his face is of utter terror, & him looking at his bloodied hand I think works nicely? Its something you actually pulled off, although truth be told, the scale of the character on this picture doesn't do the expression much justice.  It sumply isn't the type of thing to focus on in a picture like this. 

Also there is SOOOO MUCH WASTED SPACE in this picture. gawd dammit put something in the background, distant horizons? clowds?... or maybe a murder of crows circleing overhead representing the dire state of mu as he is on his last legs & they are waiting for him to die.... fuck SOMETHING...
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SpectreCx9 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for this, Catz. I'll keep all this in mind for future example. 
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